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Copyright Douglas MacIlroy
“What’s that thing?” asked Doug’s girlfriend.
“A model of the planet Aloha.”
“Aloha?”
“Yeah, it’s where my sci-fi novel happens. It’s a world where evil surfers enslave young girls on pineapple plantations. Sort of like Hawaii.”
“Sounds dark and . . . gnarly.”
“There’s romance too. A hula girl falls for an old submarine captain and he rescues her from the surfers.”
“How could an old guy defeat all those young buff surfers?”
“He has a laser-guided Frisbee loaded with toxic poi.”
“That reminds me. Are you coming to the luau tonight?”
“Can’t. Too many Friday Fictioneer stories to read.”
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Poi, oh, Poi, what an imagination. But I believe Doug could overcome any and all surfers by stealth and cunning. 🙂
Ffnar, ffnar…although, this really doesn’t seem so fictional!
😉 Did I tell you I have a new alter-ego? http://stepbackfromtheedge.wordpress.com/
Ooo, a laser guided frisbee! Nice touch. He should leave the reading for a bit and go to the party.
Oh Ron…I laughed out loud like a little school girl after reading this lol…very clever. Love love love it. Very nicely done
Enjoyed that! Great to know you are so busy with FF.
Scott
Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2012/12/13/friday-fictioneers-10/
Don’t miss the luau on my account just because I go hundreds of words over the limit. Fun use of the prompt!
Ron,
A good fun read dude.
Tom
Ha, good one! I laughed and laughed. Oh, and you sneaked the laser-guided frisbee with toxic poi. That’s my favorite part.
I Loved it!! 😀 I’m a big Sci-Fi fan and naturally enjoyed the read – And, your story really made me laugh! Really good job! 🙂
Oh, what a fun read…garnered lots of chuckles. Forget about the stories…go to the party.
Thanks for starting my day with a smile Ron, nice one.
Funny, Ron! Very good indeed. I read it aloud to my husband too, who had a good laugh. I hope Doug isn’t having trouble with all these multiple personalities.
Dear Ron,
I laughed out loud. Personally I’m up for the luau. Toxic poi? Planet Aloha? Classic. Love it! Loved it!
shalom,
Rochelle
What a unique and fun read!
Nice homage to Doug and his great photo–and a writing theme, too! Great job.
Here’s mine: http://unexpectedpaths.com/friday-fictioneers/status-update/
Doug is quite the celebrity this week.
Very clever and amusing. Loved this piece!
Aloha! 🙂
Totally gnarly, dude.
Sounds like an interesting planet (and an interesting idea, to make a model of the planet we’re imagining when we write). Good one.
surfer dudes and hula girls? toxic poi? Ok, where do I sign up! Really fun read! 🙂
I think Dr. Douglas need some henchmen and I’m here to sign up. Someone needs to look after the girls while he’s busy defeating those buff young surfers.
I am waiting eagerly for that novel. I loved this. 🙂
Where can I get a laser guided frisbee? Wonderful!
Wonderful story.
This was pretty damn good… You know Doug well.
you’re right, lots to read for sure. i mean “fer shur.” well done incorporating a few personal pokes in there too. i’m sure he appreciated it.
Dear Ron,
Me thinks you’ve been partaking of too much toxic poi. I got a great laugh out of this story and bid you a fond farewell from the planet Aloha.
Sincerely, still giggling,
Doug
Hi Doug,
Thanks for being a good sport!
Ron
Very funny!
haha, poor Doug is getting all the jokes this week – I’m not surprised he liked this one though; nice bit of lighthearted fun for a morning read!